Friday 3 August 2018
Hopa Immersion Assembly
On Monday the whole of pt england school went to Immersion Assembly. There were several videos but the first team was team 1. They are eating healthy and doing fitness all of team 1 teachers were all making a movie and all of the students were in the movie to and then all of the students learnt a lesson to not stay late.
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Kia ora Hopa, I like how you have started with a topic sentence and added details about Team 1's item. To finish your paragraph strongly, you can add a concluding sentence - what did you think of the Immersion Assembly? What did you think of Team 1's item? Looking forward to seeing more of your writing this term Hopa!
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