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Monday, 4 April 2016

hopa wild night

WRITE: By hopa aperhama

Last  Wednesday we went to our tent running and the wet grass was wet our foot were dirty and the tent was wet and i went under my tent and water went on my head like it was raining and I went to my to to go to sleep with lorenzo and frederick and then. In the middle of the night we heard strong winds going on to my tent.And then the strong wind went pass strong as the wind goes the thunder was clapping together the branch snapped off  . And it was middle of the night and then my tent broke we all woke up suddenly a voice outside said. Get your stuff and go into. The library and i said ok and then we ran to the library and then….

We fell asleep i woke up everyone was talking and then i saw the thunder in the library as the shadow it was a strong thunder. I was scared that a tree was going to fall down so at 6.00 we woke the end.



Wednesday, 16 March 2016

hopa three little pig

Many years ago there lived a old mother pig and three little pigs. They lived in a little grassy clearing in the middle of a dark forest. The three little pigs grew so big that their mother said to them, "You are too big to live here any longer. You must go and build houses for yourselves but be very careful that the big bad wolf does not eat you.”


The three little pigs thought that the wolf will eat them up. They knew because the mum said the wolf will eat you and then Pepa the first little pig said let’s build a house the third little pig ju said i’ll build a stone house and the first pig said i’ll be building a straw house. And the second pig said that he would build a house out fast to get the sticks and then the second little pig went and got the wood and built and the other little pig went off and got the wood and he finished the first pig built it for not that long or not that tough the second little pig took longer to build the sticks and the other little pig built it and it took longer to make it a couple of days. And then the big bad wolf appeared out of nowhere and  went to the first pigs house then the wolf  knock knock his here and the pig said you can’t get me with your chin chinny chin and then the wolf huffed and he puffed and he blew his house and then the first little pig ran as fast as he could to the second little house and then the wolf knocked on his door and then the second little pig said you can’t come in with my chinny chin chin and then the wolf huffed and he puffed and he blew his house away and both of the pigs ran as fast as he could to the third little pig and the stone house was strong and then the wolf went and did the pigs tipped toed and they got in the wolf knocked as hard as he could and then the house didn’t budge and the the wolf had an idea he went up top of the roof and went into the chimney and then he burnt from his bum and ran away.

Monday, 7 March 2016

gohper story

On a sunny day there was a farm but dirty old muddy ugly farm but a clean road and it had fresh clean corns. There was a gopher named suu he was good looking but chubby hungry and fat.  He like food but most he loves is digging he was so fast and digging his favorite food was tomato’s he loved tomato’s he was strangling to find food but noting but then he found a truck on the road driving and there was tomato’s he tried to stop it but it wouldn’t stop then he dug a hole heaps of corns and tomato’s and heaps of fruit and he saw one and then the crow found it and got it. And then he found a another one and then the crow found and then heaps of crows did it and then no more was there and then he dug away the end.