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Thursday, 9 February 2017
chicken flavored worms
WALT: write quality introductions.
Have you ever cooked chicken flavored worms?well mr goodwin was so tired, he gave us chicken flavored worms which was so disgusting that was very weird day today eating chicken flavored worms what else
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Hook
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My introduction is boring.
It is difficult to read.
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My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience.
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My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more.
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When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more.
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Orientation
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My introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about.
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My audience has some idea about what I am writing about.
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My audience is clear what I am writing about.
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My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing.
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Task Description: in this lesson we did a experiment of a chicken flavored noddles we and room 7 had to eat noddles and were just pretending it was worms we had to do it for our writing it was very yummy that's all .
Tuesday, 13 December 2016
my final blog post for 2016
Final blog post for 2016
My favorite time in rm 9/10 is when we had athletics because it was so much fun running around and playing also we had no learning and thank you viewers i will be back in 2017 i will do more learning merry Christmas.
Wednesday, 7 December 2016
animal racing
Once in pt england school we had this weird event named 2016 pt england school animal event . We are bringing any animal and Awathan bringed a horse and Lorenzos one is a dragon. And my one was a phoenix lorenzo and awathan “said i will beat you” and I “said no you are not i can fly over you”. And Lorenzo “said ohh yeah let’s go”
when we arrived in pt england school we were so excited. I “said let’s go Awathan” and the person said on your marks get set GO!. and it was like the flash but faster and my phoenix flew over I “said I am going to beat you” and I went super fast. and I could not see them and then Awathan caught up to me and then I saw Lorenzo on his huge flying dragon. and I tried to go faster but it would not work and then they caught up I was so surprised and I went faster and then it worked. I was gone all the way I went so fast i fell off! And they could see me and i said
phoenix come back!!. Awathan and lorenzo passed me And I said noooo!!!!!!! And then the phoenix flew and saw me and he went and picked me up. And I said faster!! And he went faster than the flash and the phoenix got there and Awathan “said. you win and I said I am faster than you. And then i got the prize i won the world cup and he got lollies and treats and i was crying. And Awathan came second and Lorenzo came third that is the story of the phoenix that beats all of them. And the people who entered the game.
Monday, 5 December 2016
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