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task description we were learning about birds and are they native endemic it was a very easy work we learned about this birds pied shag kea scared kingfisher and last one silvereye
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| Walt: write a recount about our experience |
Have you built a tower out of paper before well we did. We built a very high 6 feet tower big it was it was huge. |
Our team came first and i learned that make sure it is not fin and big and the girls came 2nd and the other girls came 3rd the other boys group came 4th and the girls group came 5th i had so much fun. I learned that you don’t come first but it is how much fun you have.
task description: we were doing a experiment how tall can your newspaper tower can go and our one was huge.
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Hook
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My introduction is boring.
It is difficult to read.
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My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience.
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My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more.
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When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more.
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Orientation
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My introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about.
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My audience has some idea about what I am writing about.
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My audience is clear what I am writing about.
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My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing.
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