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Thursday, 16 February 2017

bird identification


Walt: make connections across multiple texts.

task description we were learning about birds and are they native endemic it was a very easy work we learned about this birds pied shag kea scared kingfisher and last one silvereye

Tuesday, 14 February 2017

news paper tower

Walt: write a recount about our experience

Have you built a tower out of paper before well we did. We built a very high 6 feet tower big it was it was huge.



I was so excited what we were going to do. Until I heard my teacher I was about to get scared in my mind I was saying what are we going to do today and it was? Building a tower out of paper we were going to get 4 to 6 or 7 panthers and my one was Deavay, Justice, Awathan, Lepa, and me so there were 5 of us and when we started planning.


Our teacher Mr Goodwin started saying we are going to use these materials scissor a long piece of tape and a planning paper our group was so confident but our teacher do not start or else? You go to detention
I was so confused at first but I got use to it that was so fun when we started building but not yet we started we needed to do the introduction then we start building.


We started building we had tape to stick it on the ground and we made a big tower out of tubes and the other people started copying and the other group of boys said there copy catters they copied us but we didn’t we started building higher and higher but not that high because it will be unstable the more higher the more it was going to fall so we made it a little small and then we tape it to all of the newspapers and we added one on the side and then there .


Our team came first and i learned that make sure it is not fin and big and the girls came 2nd and the other girls came 3rd the other boys group came 4th and the girls group came 5th i had so much fun. I learned that you don’t come first but it is how much fun you have.

task description: we were doing a experiment how tall can your newspaper tower can go and our one was huge.

Friday, 10 February 2017

Thursday, 9 February 2017

hundread tens and ones


Walt: Understand place value for the hundreds, tens and ones

place vaule


Walt: Understand place value for the hundreds, tens and ones

kowhai tree

chicken flavored worms


WALT: write quality introductions.
Have you ever cooked chicken flavored worms?well mr goodwin was so tired, he gave us chicken flavored worms which was so disgusting that was very weird day today eating chicken flavored worms what else



Introduction Rubric

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Hook
My introduction is boring.
It is difficult to read.
My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience.
My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more.
When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more.
Orientation
My introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about.
My audience has some idea about what I am writing about.
My audience is clear what I am writing about.
My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing.
Task Description: in this lesson we did a experiment of a chicken flavored noddles we and room 7 had to eat noddles and were just pretending it was worms we had to do it for our writing it was very yummy that's all .