Wednesday, 6 July 2016

hopa carrots

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.
        WALT: write a recount.

Paragraph 1   

When I came in class I was very excited what I was going to do stuff. and then when there I saw a big  long and orangey delicious carrots and I was like huh where's the rabbits.

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Paragraph 2 Write Here: we did some carving on a board we were carving with a knife and the carrot was our friend. But we were just pretending if we had no friends we designed our own carrot he we used the board just for the carrots because we might make a big mess. We made heaps of mess at the court .

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Paragraph 3   
I designed my carrot with a smile and  he had long hair and a side mouth and eyes I created my carrot I like my carrot and at the end we got to eat and after that we had to take a photo and my one was called girin I loved my my carrot he looked so beautiful.

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 Paragraph 4   
My best part was when we ate him because I was starving.

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