Hopa Narritave writting

Once upon a time there were 11 pelicans they are special breeds they were all happy eating an
d sleeping they fought that the owners would never let them go.
Until 1 day there was an accident one of the birds heard a person saying
something he got all the pelicans up and they listened closely they said”we
should sell them you know how much money were going to get out of this.

They all were petrified they couldn’t speak for days. Then something happened well they were
going
to sleep the humans pick them up and then put them into a cage then the next day they woke up
and saw that they were in a cage'
. Heaps of people were there some said”how magnificent what breeds are they” or they would say
”how much did the people sell it for”. 

The pelicans were upset but they lifted themselves up and they trained for months and
they waited for the
right opportunity to escape so they planned.
They found the right time to escape on a Friday night November the 15th they found it they had to
be quiet so one
of them quietly plucked their feathers and they unlocked
the cage and they escaped FINALLY said one of them.

They went back to the house but then they saw it was 5 times bigger once again
one of them plucked a feather and got in there but of course you can’t just walk in
and think it is safe there were lasers, security, cameras, so many stuff so they did it step by step.

They succeed without getting caught but once they got to the end they couldn’t
see anything so all pelicans pushed everything one of them found something
into a secret hatch they went in and more obstacles.

But this time it was harder there was sharks and their were fish’s in their and
they couldn’t resist to eat fish’s but one of them pulled them in and they said
it wasn’t worth it so they got pass and found the room so they killed them the end.

Hopa 6-sentence story

Once upon a time there was a young man who was a professional player at fortnite he has won millions of dollars. He lived in the faze house with other people like Cloak (the leader) and other famous people. He is a professional fortnite player and he makes stuff that is hard looks easy so when people try to do it they would fail. He is so good that he is getting invites to clans and is making decisions. He felt guilty for joining the other clans because how professional he is and he started to get scared.but he has chosen the right path and is still in the faze clan and has millions of views and subscribers which has made his life happy The end.

:description The whole of our writing class had to write a 6 sentence story. We did it from an order starting is once upon a time, describe were the character lives,Describe the characters special talent, describe the problem, tell why the character felt that way, and tell how the character solved the problem,

Hopa what makes a great sibling?

Have you been a good son? Well to be a good son there are so many stuff but my ideas will make you a better child then you were before. But sometimes it makes you the same. Here are my 3 ideas to be better. Helpful,manners, and to help your kids.

First to be a good son you will have to be helpful around the house so when you get home and your mom and dad aren’t there clean up the house you don’t have to be asked it’s just a simple thing just do work when you are not told to.

Next be respectful and use good manners saying excuse me goes a long way your parents to. When your cleaning and you can't get past just say excuse me so they can move. When your cooking just say excuse me and you can get any tool because using your manners makes you a happier person and when you generous then the next person will and it will be like a chain reaction of kindness.

Also you have to help the kids when there down try lift them up say kind words to them so they can be happy. You also have to help them with their homework because it’s challenging for the young ones because they don’t know that much stuff about reading, writing, or math.

Three ideas for being a good sibling are good son to be helpful around the house, to have manners when cleaning or cooking, and also to help your kids when they are down or needing help for their homework. Do you have any ideas on how to be a better sibling to your brothers and sisters?

hopa what makes a good leader?

Have you ever wanted to know what makes a good leader? You have to have many things such as wisdom, cheerful, and confident but you can be other things but these are my ideas.

First to be a good leader you will have to be wise so make very good decisions. So if u guys get lost you will have a wise leader and then they follow the leader. Maybe he is wise enough that he is going the right path. Like lebron James he passes it to the right person and the person will sometimes get it in.

Next is to be cheerful even if your team is losing clap or if your team is winning You don't know how long they have practiced they probably had no sleep and stayed up all night.


Also you have to be confident because when you make a speech your words will come out wrong and your legs will shake. So you have to stand up tall like your proud of being the leader.

Those are my 3 ideas to be an excellent leader you have to be wise,confident, and cheerful and it doesn't take that much skill to make good decisions or clap for your team or even to be confident so you can stand up and not be scared.

Hopa Story tale Twist

In the story we have 3 humans and 1 bear, The 1 bear was lonely
#and didn’t know what to do but the 3 humans had a
house and they had nice beds, nice ps4,
and nice breakfast. The 3 humans made breakfast.
They made porridge but they went for a walk and they left to get milk.
The bear smelt something a very gamey smelt he followed and then his sent stopped he smelt
FORTNITE he had a very curious face on thinking what to do play the game or eat the bear had
nothing to do so he played the game.

He played for 27 minutes and then stopped he was wondering if he could take a nap because
it takes 3 hours for the boys to finish so he took a nap for 2 hours. 2 hours have passed
and he woke up he started to get hungry and looked for food but he couldn’t find any so then
he stepped his game up and he killed a dear for his food” it was delicious said the bear”.

And then played games but then something happened the boys came back with 5
milks he saw that the door was opened so then he said” I told you to close the door
said the brother” they were confused. He said” I did” they had shivers down their spine
they all thought it was the ghost they went in with the vacuum they started it and thought the
ghost will get sucked in.

The bear on the other hand was terrified he shut down the game and hid. the vacuum found something
under there they were confused they lifted up the blanket and found the bear. He cried and
cried and they said” its ok we were scared of you” he came out and said” t-thank you” he sounded
very scared he came out and they all lived a happy life together.

                                        THE END

Hopa Walter Carr

Walter carr had to go to sleep early so he could go to his new job it was a 20 miles and he had to wake up at 12:pm. So he eat at 8:pm and took a nap at midnight he woke up he tooks his wallet and his phone and
also a baseball bat so if a dog comes and bite him he would wack him. So when he started walking and then he saw a dog so then he grabbed a stick and throw it so then the dog ran that way so Walter ran the other way. Once he walked his legs were tired but he focused on his goal.

At 2:am he passed the city of hoover, around 4:am he reached Pelham, so then he decided to take a rest because his legs were dying so a police car came and pulled over  the office said are you alright, Walter said yes so then he explained what he was doing, Walter said this is crazy but I am walking to work it is my first day he said.

The officer said when did you last eat. And Walter said i eat bologna and eggs so then the officer said if he wanted to eat Walter said yes, and the officer said the foods on me. They went what a burger Walter ordered a chicken brisket the officer dropped him off at a church so around 5:30 he started walking again Walter was walking on a two lane road.

Another officer said are you Walter the other officer said that you walked to get to your new job so he officer drove him to the last four miles so at 6:30 he walked up to jenny's house and he explained everything to Jenny.

The officer said he is a nice kid the officer said he's been walking all night to get to your house then tears started coming out. so then she said to take a rest Walter no i'd rather get started. After they moved the stuff he started playing basketball with Lamey's sons ones 11, ones 13, and one is 16 she Lamey said what made him keep going and after she said he's such a humble ,kind hearted, person" she said she is really incredible.

One of carr's new workers gave him a ride.

Hopa senses

This sad baby is crying because he pooped his nappy.

He is touching a colourful skirt.

You could hear loud crying from the baby

He walked to his mum

Baby’s Hair gone messy

Hopa using our senses

On the beach on a sunny day there were 5 boys. All of them had a towel so they could go swimming. once they put there toes in it was cold, the ruff ocean was crashing onto them and the ruff wind they popped some manus. but once they got out all they could smell is b.o.,sunscreen, and toe jams so then they walked to a nice spot and put down there towel and waited to get dried. so while they were getting dried the 2 other boys went to build sand castles so then after they were all dried up they had a shower,got dressed, and once they finish they all eat and went to sleep…

sports journalist Wallace Spearmon

How were you in the race? I was feeling very confident in the race.

How do you train? Do you train in the rain? Yeah because i never gave up whatever happened.

Do you want to do better so you could come second or first?of course i will because i really need to come second or first.

But when i was at the start of the race i felt very nervous because Usain Bolt,Yohan Blake, and warren weir but i never gave up even if i lost.

Hopa Immersion Assembly

On Monday the whole of pt england school went to Immersion Assembly. There were several videos but the first team was team 1. They are eating healthy and doing fitness all of team 1 teachers were all making a movie and all of the students were in the movie to and then all of the students learnt a lesson to not stay late.

Hopa andrew fifita

Andrew Fifita is a famous NRL player. He played for the wests Tigers for 2 years. Andrew also plays for the Sharks He was born in Blacktown, New South Wales,Australia He represents tonga. He weighs 116 kgs. Andrew has been in 4 other teams and he is a skilful player.

Hopa Sentence Comining

Description: we had to combine the sentences with other sentences and it was pretty hard

Hopa less than one second

The character’s are Ashley and Shiree there dreams are to become a racer in a drag strip race. I know that Shiree is the boy that has yellow hair and a blue shirt. Ashley is a girl with a orange jacket and a orange t-shirt they are kids that have race cars and each one of them are competing in races against each other as well as against adult racers. They are the only children competing in the anual shot car drag racing nationals in Nelson. They are professional with cars and they also clean there cars but the cars that they are cleaning are only toy cars and they are not having a real drag strip car race.

Hopa Sentence types

Hopa Does the weater change our mode.

Does The Weather Change Our Mode?

Does the weather change your mode? Well it does summer is fun time and winter is just sleeping like how attums when you play in the leaves. At the time summer you get frustrated and the rain is just annoying but i know he best 3 seasons ever.

First is of course summer it is hot and sunny and you can swim have a water squirt it is so much fun it is hot and sometimes you can get sunburnt and you can possibly get skin cancer so you should wear a hat. You shouldn’t wear a hat when your swimming because the hat could get wet and sink and and then you would not find your hat.

But summer is very cool.

2nd is autumn because you can okay in the leaves and see all the leaves fall then after you can see all of the stuff that you couldn’t see before. i like autumn it is the 2nd best weather i have ever had but some bad reasons why you can not go out without a jumper it could get cold so then no playing in leaves.

Lucky last is winter because it is nice and warm and it is comfy i like winter because. You can have 3 or 4 blankets and not get in trouble that is the nicest thing about winter that is the lucky last.

I hope that you liked all the writing that i did and all the weather change moods i hope you liked it from all of the writing.

Description: we are writing about the weather changing our modes and those are 3 seasons that i like.

Hopa Framents & Scentences

WALT: Make Fragments in to Sentences.

we are turning fragments in proper sentences with capital letters and full stops.